English · Stage 5
My Writing Goal
Study skill — turn one piece of feedback into a small, clear writing goal, apply it, then name exactly what you improved
✦ English📘 Stage 5 · S5⏱ ~11 min🧒 Ages 9–10★ Free to start
I can set a small writing goal, use feedback, and say what I improved.
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Kavi Sets One Goal
Kavi the owl finds a note on his story: "Nice work! Try starting your sentences in different ways." "That's my goal!" he hoots. "I won't fix everything at once — I'll set one small goal, change my writing to meet it, then say exactly what I improved."
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What your child will learn
1Three moves to a better draftTap each move to hear Kavi explain it.
2A good goal is small, clear, and comes from feedbackA goal you can act on names ONE thing to change. Turn big, vague advice into a small target you can actually check.
3Before vs After (goal: vary my openers)Same story, one goal applied. Tap each card to hear it.
4Which goals can you actually act on?
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A peek inside
Your teacher writes: "Good story! Try starting your sentences in different ways." What small goal should you set?
turn the one piece of feedback into a small, clear target you can act on
Try this at home: Feedback says 'add a describing word'. What small goal could you set?
Ready to play and learn?
Start the free interactive lesson, or print the handout for screen-free play.
Part of English · Stage 5 · S5 on KAVI Academy — a secular, whole-child learning platform for ages 5–12.